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Your taste all over my tongue,
filling my mouth.
Wrap myself around you,
completely engulf you, taste your saliva,
breathe your scent in.
Feeling your body writhe under me.
Feeling your warm moistened skin against mine.
I want you...
I hold your sides and hips tightly,
feeing your muscles twich and flex.
I want you.
Run my fingers through your hair, down to the back of your neck,
pulling you into a kiss.
Want to kiss you....
Bite your lip gently.
Trail a line of kisses down your neck,
my nails dig slightly into your back
a little harder.

I want you right now. All of you for this moment. You are perfect tonight.

I want to have touched every inch of your body, to feel every inch of your body.

Love to fall asleep with our bodies stuck together in a mixture of exhaustion, sweat, and pure comfort.
Feel your arms around me, your body behind me, asleep against my body.

Pure, naked, natural.

I would spend days with you, never moving from our comfy paradise. Our world away from all others.
Holding you so tightly,
against me, soft, sweaty and blissful.
:iconjust-another-god:
A night between two aquaintances.
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~Jazzpirate May 30, 2004  Hobbyist Photographer
violent? I dont see any violence... I love this. its very sweet and emotional. very passionate. this is excellent. beautiful
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:iconjust-another-god:
Sorry if it offends you creeront.
I put the poem in the category Erotic as it is quite carnal and sexual. A lot of my poetry tends to be that way; this one especially so since I was directly inspired to write it about/with another. It's not up to par with most of my other works (which have yet to be published here) but it has significant emotional meaning to me.
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:iconcreeront:
This poem wants to be erotic, but it's turning out more like a poem about bodily fluids and violence. It sort of turns my stomach thinking about it.
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:icontomo-chi:
It's erotic, but sweet enough to overlook that. =D
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